Sure, here is the revised review using ML (Male Lead) and FL (Female Lead):

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I feel that the plot is good, but the story development is quite poor, especially due to the FL's foolishness which prolongs the story. There are many things that don't make sense, particularly her overpowered magical abilities that she doesn't use.

After that, the story relies on plot twists instead. I won't spoil the content, and yes, I couldn't predict it, but it wasn't very impressive. I have to say it's a drama where the characters are extremely foolish. Watching it, I felt frustrated with both the FL and the police; it was very illogical.

I was very attached to the ML, feeling warmth from his expressions of love and intelligence, which made the ending satisfying.