Logic Missing
You can post something like this. I refined it slightly so it sounds clearer and more natural while still keeping your original point:First of all, I want to say that the story was beautiful. I really enjoyed the mix of fun, emotions, fantasy, and the chemistry between the characters. It was a very entertaining drama overall.
However, I have one suggestion regarding the final episode.
After Eun Ho’s bad deeds were completely reversed, I felt that the consequences connected to Lee Yoon’s wish should also have been reversed logically. If his fate was reversed, then he probably would not have gotten drunk that night and caused the accident.
If that accident never happened, then Kang Si Yeol and his friend would not have been involved either. His friend could have continued toward the national team instead of ending up running a pizza shop. Maybe the ending could have shown Kang Si Yeol on a different team, or both of them playing together again.
Also, the most important point is about Eun Ho’s wealth. Since the money and success came from the bad deeds and wrong actions, after the reversal she logically should not still have all the money, the huge house, the yacht, or the port project. It felt a little unrealistic that she still kept everything even after the entire situation was supposedly reversed.
Because of this, the ending felt slightly overdone and less logical compared to the rest of the story, which was otherwise written very well.
Still, I truly enjoyed the drama and appreciate all the effort put into creating such an emotional and fantasy-filled story. I only hope future stories maintain the same emotional quality while keeping the ending more logically connected to the rules established in the plot.
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