Fast Paced
I wish both main charecters were fleshed out more. I'm unclear when either one of them started liking each other.
I think it needed to be longer or drop that subplot towards the end. I think FL feeling guilty about using him was enough conflict without having to have the competition.
The cousin thing was weird-I had look it up and learned that that is normal in Japan.
I was a great plot idea that needed more breathing room.
Do Me When You Come Home was kind of the same storyline, except with adults and the ML offered and was in the know about being her romance reference. I liked that story better.
I think it needed to be longer or drop that subplot towards the end. I think FL feeling guilty about using him was enough conflict without having to have the competition.
The cousin thing was weird-I had look it up and learned that that is normal in Japan.
I was a great plot idea that needed more breathing room.
Do Me When You Come Home was kind of the same storyline, except with adults and the ML offered and was in the know about being her romance reference. I liked that story better.
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