I want to make it clear that this is my own opinion and choice. The whole idea behind the story is interesting, but it could have been better. Let me explain: I have a serious problem with the lack of action (drama). Maybe they didn't want to do the same drama we all know, but it could have been better if Pleum had struggled a little bit more before winning him over(KhonProt). P Jess didn't try hard enough and lacked consistency to win him over. When did KhonProt realize that he liked the P pleum? 1 full episode could have been good to explain what P pleum did to make him fall in love , and how was it for KhonProt from high school to university to see the man he love been with a lot of them? I didn't feel like he was really "in pain" only felt that he was angry at the end not angry but jealous Why didn't he try to confess his feelings again at the university or at least make him fall in love with him instead of always saying "sorry" every time Pleum is rude, or the gentle but why KhonProt is the one to apologize? Yes P plaum did but most of the time it was KhonProt. It could have been a little bit spicy to have both friends fighting (not a real fight). I mean, show some tension between them so that we have that thrilling moment of uncertainty about who he is going to choose, even though he was and still is madly in love with Pleum. We should been like "Will P Jess be the one to make the change of heart?" Those are the little details that I think could have made it better, but overall, it was good. Also, please check your subtitles; they are not right at all.