Nathan

I truly wanted to like this drama... even though I only learned about it days before the air date, even though the release schedule was disappointing, and even though the intro made me want to skip it despite the beautiful song because it was clearly AI-made. (I really don't think hiring a real artist would be that expensive.). AND even with Xiao Xun's low effort to hide his greedy nature and plastic smile, yet there's CZ still getting blinded because of his villainous charm.

The drama was fast-paced, so there should have been nothing wrong with it. As one OST implied, "the world was their chessboard." This was a game: a rematch, perhaps, with no third round. But this pacing deteriorated the emotional impact viewers should have felt for the characters. Almost every plot reached a satisfying climax, but the duration for each arc was too short. I'm not sure what cuts were made, but they were noticeable. And why were their mouth not matching wat they say... was it the Voice Acting or the Script of the Voice Actors that was the problem, cause it was annoyingly obvious for viewers to see.

Secondly, character motivations were lacking in most cases and that can make or break a story. Take Xie Yan Fang (XYF). He was greedy for power, sure ...but is that really enough reason to deceive and scheme against his own brother, starting from childhood and continuing into adulthood? Another thing that bothered me: why did he always plot schemes, always accompanied by this unique fan, yet there was no explanation of where it came from? After a while, I stopped hoping for a backstory and just became increasingly curious about what horrors that white-feathered mystery bird experienced while being plucked bald by him to make this fan...qwq

What kept me going were the face cards(nobody can say they weren't ;) ), I admit the casting was excellent, and the chemistry was there in almost every scene with the female lead. But a beautiful vase can house equally beautiful flowers it can still be tainted if the flowers aren't properly nourished. The romance between the main leads felt forced. It was cute how Xie Yan Lai (XYL) fell in love with her at first sight, it made sense until it didn't. His motivation became questionable when XYL waited until the last episode to announce his real goal of cutting ties with his family. That made me doubt his initial reason for getting close to her from start to finish. I'll assume he was simply in a dire state, changed his name, worked himself to death, and genuinely fell in love while being Chu Zhao's (CZ) private guard. But assuming shouldn't be left to viewers instead it's the drama's job to make the motivations of the characters clear.

One viewer said some things felt ambiguous, and I agree. XYF "chose" to "exclude" CZ from his death note because he thought she was "different." I get it he experienced almost nonexistent sincere relationships (He said "It's rare and almost enviable" to see two people match well in character.). And he also found her struggle interesting, different, like the pets he owned. He also said he wanted her to live because A'Yu would be "sad." But hearing those reasons from a psycho who could sacrifice an entire city, who plotted against his clan since childhood, and who faked his gentlemanly persona as a show for his outcast brother? No way was his defeat reasonable. Women empowerment may explain the writer's ending for him, but it's hardly believable for a man like his character.

Lastly, I don't know if this is just me, but there were too many crying scenes for Chen Du Ling. She's not a river so why are her eyes always overflowing whenever she's on screen most of the time? Instead of feeling emotional, I got distracted and felt the pain in her eyes as they turned red from all the crying. It's a miracle they never got puffy. I know they were just fake tears, and CZ had the right reasons to cry but even with a high attention span, I was pulled out of the scene. Sometimes the tears just weren't needed. I think her role in VOS had less of this. I sincerely hope CDL's eyes get a rest in her next dramas. Perhaps in "The Doll Game", I won't get distracted by tears anymore.

But there were good things too beyond the good-looking cast, of course. The women subduing men was a great emphasis to what this drama seeks to showcase. And then, although the music was distracting at times, soon I found myself humming one of the OSTs while making my afternoon coffee. Xie Yan Fang was a compelling character. I was just disappointed by the lackluster reason for his demise. He reminded me of those rare villains (Ok Ul Tae, Jin Mu, Run Yu, etc.): the well-defined brows, the acting, the villainous strategies were all noteworthy, but their endings felt empty and unbelievable. I'm still sad about Deng Yi's death, even though he was practically asking for it every time. I also appreciated how they gave him many scenes with that kid he liked to talk to, it was never answered who the kid was, but you might know if you think about it. The same goes for the 'mirror' CZ talks to on the pond realm. I'm still early in "The First Jasmine", but I've already seen equally strong representation of mental health struggles... you know the kind not shoved in viewers' faces and without over-explaining. That's rare in dramas like this in the romance-fantasy or historical fiction genre, and I hope to see more characters like this in future dramas.