I find your review very logical, had the same issue while trying to watch this. The story is really messed up and boring and story lines, dialogues is one of the most important part for a film to me this is where this drama fails badly on. I really wanted to like this drama.
Okay the end of this episode is too classic esp for the next episode. I'm so sad that YJS will break up with NYW.…
For me it's really annoying, there can be other ways to go about it breaking up with her is just bad, the writer did not try well it just shows it's typical Korean drama, I was really enjoying this drama why did the writer do this, well let's see how the episode will be.