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forcing to be happy ending with logic with 2 special episode

the drama scene looks like combining eternal love, ash of love, love and redemption scene, but has a slightly different story,, jump and blind like eternal love, tragic love and punishment like ash of love, forbiden love like love and redemption

The first 18 episodes were very boring for me, I liked when they went to the mortal realm(around eps 18)
actually the story is good too bad, the acting is actually quite good,but the editing make me speechless

The storyline is very weird messy, it makes me keep thinking, why is it like this, so I can't focus on watching, what's the point of watching drama if you don't understand the story? and give high rating just because a little romance?

i really cant give high rating just because a little romance, nothing special romance just
can only be accepted if you are a beginner watcher ,i already watch alot of drama like this and more focus with the details
the story of lead CP is one of them accepts one of them refuses continuously kike that until the end of the story.
I enjoy the friendship of yumo, yandan and yinyuan,
yumo at the beginning looks very nerd, but I like the character, love but not force, envy but not hate

and for the another support CP, i like them too,,but their acting and story still looks very newbie, it's good enough


I am very impressed with the directors and editors, they destroy people's work, the edits are very obvious reversed in the scene,, inconsistent in the use of words in each dialogue, loopholes everywhere,,I AM VERY SURE THE EDITOR IS VERY SLEEPY WHEN EDITING OR NOT INTENTION

the story is boring at the beginning, a lot of new things keep popping up plus the editing are very messy, it seems that all things happen suddenly for no clear reason,, even they explain it later about heaven demon war, but the story sequence is very messy, and not only that,, Inconsistent dialogue or mispronunciation but the director was not aware when shooting, and inconsistent scenes ,, are they not briefing before shooting ?
I want to pretend I didn't see it but to much,
I don't know how many times I sighed and wanted to drop this drama, BECAUSE THE LOOPHOLE IS SO OBVIOUS!



?(1) MESSY CHAIN STORY,, WRONG SCENE,,BAD EDITING,SHUDENLY SCENE
1. Sixuan, her betrayal story is only short story,but in my opinion the sequence of scenes is very chaotic, its better if she appeared first and then gave the scene she betrayed, but its not! and it seems that Yinyuan has a relationship with Sixuan but it's not clear what.

2. ‎the effect of skill not match with the action they do, and sometimes dont understand what they do for

3. ‎the demin and heaven war part, really really mess, the story sequence should not be like that, although it will be explained later, it's still unacceptable,, war begin shuddenly, end shuddenly

4. ‎ep 26, tang zhou's master left two objects, the hairpin and magic weapon, that magic weapon is one of the 7 magic tools to be burned when yandan pretends zhixi to catch the traitor which should have been burned

5. ‎i know yumo know about ziling identity,but i shocked when yandan know about it too, when? they both not look well from the first.
when ep 21,, 5:21 , i think yandan already know the real body of ziling,,,but why 23:11 she look like she didnt know about that and joking him just a little turtle

7. ‎ep 22, heaven emperor said to make yinyuan easier to investigate the case, he will have all his memories, but when reincarnated to mortal, luming said yinyuan celestial power and memory will be seal by celestial armor, but in ep 47, they said again that the memory that should be kept is manipulated by someone

8. ‎ep 33,,when attacked by shengde,, yandan said "quick, i can't hold it anymore" but they havent told tang zhou to eat the pills zhao yan gave first,, i think the scene was reversed, i was confused why suddenly told to be hurry, what action to do ?apparently told him to eat the pill

9. ep 56,, what?!I'm sure this is wrong,, isnt the 3 神器 (celestial artifacts) already stolen by the mastermind? the editing show yinyuan healing with 3 stolen artifacts and its go in to his body again,but the remaining artifact (dizhi) they have not in there,,
proved by ep 57,, 10:39 the stolen 3 celestial artifacts come out from MASTERMIND body, and yandan get it back the 3 artifacts



?(2) PRETENDING STUPID AND USELESS ACTION
1. yandan go to ask luming to help her find a book that can help her practice to protect herself from yinyuan, luming said all the book in yanxu palace, and her dont want to borrow with yinyuan but all the book is her punishment and she can access all the book

2. ‎ep 6, Yandan was punished for writing heaven's rules with a very heavy pen, she lifted up very hard, she but could laying sleep by biting the pen, isnt it pinched?

3. ‎ep 11, yinyuan craving a lotus burning pot to yandan, but yandan She didn't realize he knew who she was

4. ‎ep 12, yumo can check Yandan's lotus heart only half, but yinyuan can't?, even though he has no doubt that it wasn't zhixi who helped him, and he believes she was yandan, but he didn't prove it by checking directly ,even he has that ability to check

5. ‎ep 16, 14:30 ,when zhixi see yandan stuff, the blue bottle she gave her,, how can the note at the bottle? ,ep 13 11:09 the brokenheart yandan already keep the bottle with the others one in the locker, do you think her mood at that time still in the mood to write that note?

6. ‎ziling afraid the others 妖 know about his real body,but he is in human world for long time ago and he show his skill in the other when fighing so why they dont know?

7. ‎Yumo who thinks Tangzhou is the reincarnation of General Huode is very forceful, even though he has seen Huode, and even though there are only 2 people left who have participated in 2 wars, War of Genesis and God Demon War ,how can?! I'm speechless

8. ‎ep 18,,,what makes me wonder is, if after cutting the horn can perish, why did he do it? if he perishes he unable to find yandan, what's the point? does he know zhaolan will give him elixir?

9. ‎ep 40,, does yandan not eat antidote from tangzhou?, if they eat why do they still think the frog is from the lake? and if she have eaten why not heal? so that thing cant be called antidote

10. ‎ are all who reincarnated from "yewangchuan" not born from zero? yandan just lose her memories, does it make sense? many souls are reincarnated through yewangchuan, if all of them go down to mortal realm in adult form wouldn't it be very strange?even though yandan was forcibly passed down but the main reason she cant reincarnation is because she can't forget her memories,she should be born from zero.
ok, lets talk about the other route, from the heaven portal, yingdeng and yinyuan seem like reincarnation from the zero, from child,, but yinyuan betrayer servant go down in adult form?! ARE YOU SERIOUS?

12. THE LAST AND IMPORTANT ONE,, IF 2 SPECIAL EPISODE IS THE ENDING, TO FORCING, WHY? PRIMODIAL LORD,RANQING ,SACRIFICE HER PRIMODIAL SPIRIT TO MAKE A SHIELD BETWEEN DEMON AND HEAVEN REALM ,, IF YINYUAN CAN BE REVIVE SO RANQING CAN BE REVIVE TO EVEN IF THEY SAID STILL HAS A LITTLE SOUL SPIRIT LEFT LIKE THE HEAVEN EMPEROR ,,, IF YANDAN CAN BE REVIVE TOO ,SO ZHIXI NO NEED TO GIVE YANDAN HER HALF OF HEART.



?(3) WRONG WORD
1. ep1 yingdeng said her real body is dizun (emperor) (帝尊) lamp wick, ep 4 he said that he used to be a subordinate of dijun, and also the lamp wick on his desk,and this is the true,,, ,wrong word

2. ‎ep 5,, female servant said her age is young but she can write the stoey "war of genesis(创世之战）"then yinyuandijun reply"是她写的创世之战"（she is who write the story war of genesis?）， but he asked to see the script,,if he said like that i think he is know about that story script first and ask someone to find the writer,if from beginning he dont know about the story he should said "她写的是创世之战？"(she wrote about war of genesis?)

3. ‎yandan when find out yumo is the black fish, she said apparently you're the fish i raised for 800 years,, what? didn't yandan just become human form for 500 years? and worked for beiming for 200 years?since the beginning the black fish lived in the pond of beiming place for long time ago when the war of genesis

4. ep8 ‎funeral of the dijuns, said wrong name ,ep 7 when war the emperor said wanyue,, but when funeral the announcer said wanyun ,the right one is wanyun

5. ‎ep 16,, 26:56 when yumo cut his horn,, zhaolan read the book, she said "剜角之人灵力盡散而亡" but the book clearly write ""剜角之人'多有'灵力盡散而亡" obviously just memorize the script, she can just read the book

6. ‎ep35,,37:41,, yandan said this place is the place to find memories that the old woman(老夫人）said? the right one is 老人(the GUY who save liuweiyang),,, im wondering which old woman told to them about memories ???




QUESTION
1. is there no different time of between mortal realm and the heaven realm? ep 18 the narrator said ‎"花界一日凡间数年，3界重分之后，人妖共存一界" ,if they in one realm why can flower clan 1 day human view years? they are in same realm! ,,so if the flower spirit and human in one frame so how many days go? 1 days or few years? ,but when yinyuan go back to heaven it seems no there is no time difference between heaven and human realm,
and ep 46 zhixi said 20years ago heavenly annouced yinyuan death
which is true？


note : the last 2 special episode maybe just for comfort? i dont know how is the novel but if this 2 sp eps is the ending it not make a sense


If I wrote something wrong, please comment, but politely