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Dear K-Drama Industry, Please Let Your Stories Marinate
I'm going to start this review with a broader observation about K-dramas these days.
I genuinely think a lot of modern dramas are suffering from a runtime problem. Writers want to tell sprawling stories with rich world-building, but then they only give themselves 12 or 14 episodes to do it. Worse still, they often aren't ruthless enough to scale the story down to fit that runtime.
So what happens?We get the outline of a grand story, but only half the execution.And My Royal Nemesis is one of the clearest examples of this problem.Because the frustrating thing is that I don't think this is a bad drama at all.
The cast , chemistry and ensemble works beautifully together.There is an undeniable charm here that makes you want to tune in every week and spend time with these characters. The story outline is also fresh and creative but the execution itself feels uneven.My biggest frustration was with the character work.
The writers should have made Shin So-ri a noblewoman. Just someone with more agency.
Not royalty or some absurdly powerful clan. Just a respectable aristocratic family :scholars, officials, academics, something that naturally places her closer to the royal court. Then mirror that in the present. Make her come from a family of judges, prosecutors, professors, diplomats, whatever. Not chaebol-level wealth, just enough social standing and influence to move in the same circles as the powerful people in the story.
Because I think the drama missed a huge opportunity with Choi Mun-do/King.
It always felt strange to me that the modern counterpart of one of the most important figures from her past life i.e the King barely had meaningful proximity to her in the present. If the drama was so invested in fate, reincarnation, and past repeating itself, why not start Shin So-ri already aligned with Choi Mun-do's world? Like she was in the past?
Imagine if she worked for them, supported them politically, or simply moved within their orbit. Then her arc becomes about slowly realizing who he truly is , how he gets in the way of her true love and actively breaking away from him. That's such a compelling conflict. Her "punishment" in this life is that fate once again places her beside the wrong man, but right ecosystem and this time she gets to choose differently.
That would've been so much richer than what we got.
And a lot of the resources and narrative importance given to the second female lead should have belonged to Shin So-ri. She often felt strangely underpowered within her own story.
Don't even get me started on all the dead people. Grandpa's wife, Cha Se-gye's parents particularly the dad , Shin So-ri's parents. Too many dead people. Grandpa's wife should not have been a mystery? We should have known her. We should have seen family rites, heard stories about her, understood her influence on the family, and gradually realized she was the modern parallel to the Queen Dowager. Imagine if Grandpa's moral decline and favoritism of Choi Mun Do was tied to losing this virtuous woman. It would've added so much emotional weight , logic and strengthened the past-present parallels. Maybe Grandpa should not have existed and it should have been a matriarch in the seat of power after a dead patriarch. That would've echoed the historical past timeline beautifully.
My biggest problem with the drama is that it kept telling me these past life connections mattered, but it rarely structured the story in a way that allowed those parallels to breathe.
Enough ranting - want to give appreciation to the cast! Loved Cha Se-gye by Heo Nam Jun and Lim JiYeon .It was also lovely seeing Jang Seung Jo. Hope they get ensemble awards or something.
I genuinely think a lot of modern dramas are suffering from a runtime problem. Writers want to tell sprawling stories with rich world-building, but then they only give themselves 12 or 14 episodes to do it. Worse still, they often aren't ruthless enough to scale the story down to fit that runtime.
So what happens?We get the outline of a grand story, but only half the execution.And My Royal Nemesis is one of the clearest examples of this problem.Because the frustrating thing is that I don't think this is a bad drama at all.
The cast , chemistry and ensemble works beautifully together.There is an undeniable charm here that makes you want to tune in every week and spend time with these characters. The story outline is also fresh and creative but the execution itself feels uneven.My biggest frustration was with the character work.
The writers should have made Shin So-ri a noblewoman. Just someone with more agency.
Not royalty or some absurdly powerful clan. Just a respectable aristocratic family :scholars, officials, academics, something that naturally places her closer to the royal court. Then mirror that in the present. Make her come from a family of judges, prosecutors, professors, diplomats, whatever. Not chaebol-level wealth, just enough social standing and influence to move in the same circles as the powerful people in the story.
Because I think the drama missed a huge opportunity with Choi Mun-do/King.
It always felt strange to me that the modern counterpart of one of the most important figures from her past life i.e the King barely had meaningful proximity to her in the present. If the drama was so invested in fate, reincarnation, and past repeating itself, why not start Shin So-ri already aligned with Choi Mun-do's world? Like she was in the past?
Imagine if she worked for them, supported them politically, or simply moved within their orbit. Then her arc becomes about slowly realizing who he truly is , how he gets in the way of her true love and actively breaking away from him. That's such a compelling conflict. Her "punishment" in this life is that fate once again places her beside the wrong man, but right ecosystem and this time she gets to choose differently.
That would've been so much richer than what we got.
And a lot of the resources and narrative importance given to the second female lead should have belonged to Shin So-ri. She often felt strangely underpowered within her own story.
Don't even get me started on all the dead people. Grandpa's wife, Cha Se-gye's parents particularly the dad , Shin So-ri's parents. Too many dead people. Grandpa's wife should not have been a mystery? We should have known her. We should have seen family rites, heard stories about her, understood her influence on the family, and gradually realized she was the modern parallel to the Queen Dowager. Imagine if Grandpa's moral decline and favoritism of Choi Mun Do was tied to losing this virtuous woman. It would've added so much emotional weight , logic and strengthened the past-present parallels. Maybe Grandpa should not have existed and it should have been a matriarch in the seat of power after a dead patriarch. That would've echoed the historical past timeline beautifully.
My biggest problem with the drama is that it kept telling me these past life connections mattered, but it rarely structured the story in a way that allowed those parallels to breathe.
Enough ranting - want to give appreciation to the cast! Loved Cha Se-gye by Heo Nam Jun and Lim JiYeon .It was also lovely seeing Jang Seung Jo. Hope they get ensemble awards or something.
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