RXinw:
It was a good attempt hehe. I appreciate how you build up to the moment.
This is what happens when your ass is demi. I dont experience sex like how they do in the films LOL If im not skipping sex scenes, I'm questioning the comfort of the angle, or something else that i feel doesnt translate into reality. Sex for me is awkward, with a lot of fumbling around so I guess that translates into how I write about it. Even worse that this was a dream scenario, mostly so I can only write what I saw. I dont know how to feel it so I dont know to turn people on with it.
I'm sorry to have disappointed you.